miércoles, 29 de septiembre de 2010

Karen's Profile

I made an interview to a partner for knowing some details of her life and this is what she said...

First I asked her about animals and she said '' yeah I like the animals in fact I have two'' she have two french poddle dogs are a nice kind of dog very friendly and soft, then we were speaking about hobbies she said that she likes to stay in the computer also going out with friends, but she said something interesting, she likes to play the piano it was interesting because that's pretty difficult. Also she likes karate, volleyball she said '' I love it'' she to watch football but playing no so much, she likes every kind of music but hates regaetoon she said '' miranda and belanova sucks'' she goes to Nicaragua every year, and she wants to go to Spain, she says she will visit Hawaii soon, she likes a lot shrimp, still doesn't know what she wants to be as a professional, I asked about children and she said ''I want to have a couple boy and girl but in a far away future I'm still to young for that'' an interesting thing she has no boyfriend, she went to Monteverde once and traveled between the trails she said that was a nice experience, her favorite colors are white, lemon green, purple and turquoise, she likes every kind of ice cream in fact she said '' I always try a different flavor'', about the cinema she said '' I like all the kind of movies but I got a problem with the horror ones because I always start them but never ends I get so scared a then I quit''

Well this is the end of an interview from a girl called Karen she is sixteen years old and lives in San Ramon, is very talkative and friendly. generally speaking a very good person.... bye.

2 comentarios:

  1. Hey Karen,

    I know that David originally wrote that, but you're supposed to make any changes in the English to make it clearer. So, my first suggestion: that huge paragraph is ONE sentence. How can you make it clearer? I put a post on my blog about run-on sentences. You and David should both check it out.

    Thanks, and see you tomorrow!
    Ryan

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  2. Sorry, I checked it again, and it's technically TWO sentences, but two really HUGE sentences :)

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